The tone in French is more elegiac and wistful than in English, I think. The photo matches beautifully, a burst of color, but also the feeling of distance and ending. Is that a kite?
I am glad you felt what I felt. It is true that replacing the French preposition with an article in English and a possessive in the last line breaks the flow, and although rhymes are not required in a haiku, in this particular one, in French, it acts as a kind of cement, and I was unable to reproduce it in English.This is windsurfing gear (yes, they fly in the sky above the water)
Ah, windsurfing. That sounds like fun but is probably much harder than it looks.
chargement…
Very hard work. Windsurfers are very muscular. It involves packing and unpacking gears and making it work (not for me, too much effort to have my exercise done) on the water, disentangling the ropes, and so on and so forth.
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Sait-on ce qu’ils font la nuit dans le coffre ?
Ca, evidemment c’est leur secret .
Magnifique photo !!!
C’etait une magnifique journee et ces windsurfers semblaient bien tristes de devoir tout remballer
très belle
Merci Derrick
Superbe photographie
J’aime bien le contrastes du bleu vif et des couleurs neutres
The tone in French is more elegiac and wistful than in English, I think. The photo matches beautifully, a burst of color, but also the feeling of distance and ending. Is that a kite?
I am glad you felt what I felt. It is true that replacing the French preposition with an article in English and a possessive in the last line breaks the flow, and although rhymes are not required in a haiku, in this particular one, in French, it acts as a kind of cement, and I was unable to reproduce it in English.This is windsurfing gear (yes, they fly in the sky above the water)
Ah, windsurfing. That sounds like fun but is probably much harder than it looks.
Very hard work. Windsurfers are very muscular. It involves packing and unpacking gears and making it work (not for me, too much effort to have my exercise done) on the water, disentangling the ropes, and so on and so forth.
Like every sort of sailing, lots of gear!
It looks as though the toys are trying to escape…
Always ready to fly in the wind!
Cette photo… Elle magnifique, c’est un haïku à elle toute seule 🙂
Oui , un beau moment
oui, liberté…
et belle photo !