Botanical garden pond , Nelson, canon, June 2018, ©Sylvie G
The winter light
coldly transparent
was blowing on my frozen
fingers, took the first steps
on the edge of the pond,
colours in a transe
under my failing gaze
but you reminded me
of the bitterness of the air
you spoke austere words
which had no effect
on the person I was
Beautiful photo, reflective poem
Thank you Derrick 😊
Beautiful photo and unsettling poem…
Not, in a negative way, hopefully (and the end is about not being unsettled, maybe )😊
Yes, I went back to check, glad the austere words met with no effect…