16 réflexions sur « La-bas »

  1. Enjoying the rhyme in this one and the way you vary it at the end, ABABBAA. Not to kill the magic by over-analysis! But I teach literature so I can’t help it 🙂
    Stunning photo too, and intriguing how the chemin is surrounded by water on two sides.

  2. La photo de la pure lumière du chemin de là-bas est belle. Le poem est un peu triste, non? Triste not quite right; some combination of reflective and nostalgic in feel. Testing my reading and interpretation skills with your lovely poems… 😉

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