Nelson, April 2018, canon ©Sylvie G
On the tightrope of desire
your fingers move in the cold air
of a recalcitrant confession.
Contrary to the sincere voice trying
to quieten down
Nelson, April 2018, canon ©Sylvie G
On the tightrope of desire
your fingers move in the cold air
of a recalcitrant confession.
Contrary to the sincere voice trying
to quieten down
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I had to read the French version to fully understand this. By ‘quieten down’ I now see you mean subdue or temper (passion). Good one
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Hope I translated it right !
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Your translation was correct, but, according to my dictionaries, other meanings are temper or subdue – that’s why the French version was, for a change, easier for me 🙂
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Oh,well, something good came out of it☺
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Ooh. This one packs a punch. I read it in one sentence, then saw the punctuation when I put my glasses on. So much packed into so few words…
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I think it would have worked without punctuation (I need glasses too to read).
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Oof, I just went to get a pair I can wear all the time and oo la la, the price! But with luck, if they work, I’ll already have them on my face! I think it would have worked without punctuation, too.
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I did the same, but still do not wear them unless I have to read. I hate having them on my nose all the time .
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